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[OT] Letter of Resignation
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Catnipped - 28 May 2005 15:45 GMT OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or reorganization. So, please let me know what you think about this letter of resignation (besides the fact that it's full of lies! ;>):
Re. Termination of Employment
Dear Sirs:
It has been both a pleasure and a privilege to have worked for you at CGI (formerly Container-Care International) for the past thirteen months. I have learned a lot during that time and hope that I have contributed positively to the business as well.
So, it is with regret that I must tender to you my resignation.
I have been offered a job working at my first career choice, web architecture.
Because of the pressing needs of my new employer I can only offer you one week's notice, but intend to help, however I can, to ease any transition issues you may face because of this short notice.
Since my new employment starts Monday, June 6, 2005, I think the best plan of action would be to transition my administrative duties and, as Mr. XXXX had previously suggested, contract to CGI, either through my new employer or directly, any services you will need to continue the development of the company intranet.
Thank you, all, for making my working experience here pleasant and rewarding. I am going to miss working with you and I wish you and your company success and prosperity.
Yours,
CatNipped
Susan M - 28 May 2005 16:05 GMT My letters have always been much shorter. Here in our oil patch, there's been a lack of skilled workers for years :-) I only put in something really positive when I really mean it and truly liked the person for whom I've worked - a straight business letter will do for the other cases, IMHO. A straight letter is like politely standing up yourself when you've been working for such a mean-spirited person too - again IMHO.
Anyway, I would do something more like:
I have been offered a job working at my first career choice, web architecture, and am tendering my resignation effective xxxx.
Because of early start date at my new employer, I can only offer one week notice. As suggested by Mr. XX, if you require my expertise in relation to the company intranet, my services be contracted either through my new employer or directly.
Sincerely,
Crazy cat lady (optional)
Just my $0.02 Susan M Otis and Chester Kept cats
> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or [quoted text clipped - 34 lines] > > CatNipped Jeanne Hedge - 28 May 2005 16:08 GMT >OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as >I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or >reorganization. So, please let me know what you think about this letter of >resignation (besides the fact that it's full of lies! ;>): I've written one of these before. They're kind of fun :)
Don't know what's right or wrong, but here are some comments solely based on how I did mine.
>Re. Termination of Employment I called mine "Resignation". That way, it's clear to any reading this in the future that they didn't terminate you, you resigned them.
>Dear Sirs: I wrote mine directly to my manager, and cc'd HR
>It has been both a pleasure and a privilege to have worked for you at CGI >(formerly Container-Care International) for the past thirteen months. I [quoted text clipped - 5 lines] >I have been offered a job working at my first career choice, web >architecture. I didn't provide them any information about my new employment in my letter. I told him when my boss asked, but otherwise I didn't think it was any of their business.
>Because of the pressing needs of my new employer I can only offer you one >week's notice, but intend to help, however I can, to ease any transition [quoted text clipped - 5 lines] >directly, any services you will need to continue the development of the >company intranet. Again, I didn't bring up my new employer. I told them that I'd be happy to transition my duties to anyone they designated and let it go at that.
>Thank you, all, for making my working experience here pleasant and >rewarding. I am going to miss working with you and I wish you and your [quoted text clipped - 3 lines] > >CatNipped My comments aside, that's a nice letter :)
Jeanne Hedge, as directed by Natasha
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Cheryl Perkins - 28 May 2005 16:37 GMT <snip>
> My comments aside, that's a nice letter :) Yes, a good letter. I agree with Jeanne that you don't need to give details of what you are going to do, and I'd avoid 'transition', which sounds a bit like jargon to me. Maybe 'transfer my files' or something. Let's see, last time I did this (usually, when I've changed jobs, which hasn't happened that often until recently, it's been something like 'the money/work ran out, we can't renew your contract, it's been nice knowing you', so I didn't need to write anything), I addressed it directly to the senior person I was dealing with, started and ended with the usual polite expressions about leaving (which you've done well), and in the middle specified the exact date I was leaving, and in case there was any uncertainty, pointed out that this date gave the amount of notice I was required by contract to offer. I wasn't specific at all about why I was leaving and where I was going. I think something vague about "accepted a position which allows me to use and develop my interests and skills in web design..." is all they need to know.
I would be careful about broad offers to keep on helping the soon-to-be exes. Use weasel-words - "I may be able to contract some of the work" or "I would be happy to discuss the possiblity of contracting some of the work" or something. You don't want them to assume you'll keep on doing everything just like always, and then getting annoyed when you don't, because you're spending forty hours a week on the new job. Especially when they have a history of expecting you to do far more work than was reasonable.
 Signature Cheryl
Kreisleriana - 28 May 2005 19:53 GMT ><snip> > [quoted text clipped - 24 lines] >they have a history of expecting you to do far more work than was >reasonable. Just want to piggyback here and say that I agree with all the above, but add that is does NO HARM WHATEVER to couch it all in the most sickening, fulsome, patently false "collegial" language about what a privilege it was to work there, and how wonderful your colleagues and boss were. Especially if your boss is Captain Ahab or Captain Queeg, as my last boss was. I had to go, despite the fact that she tried to hold employees by giving them terrible or no references to people who "betrayed her" by getting completely fed up with her and leaving-- my predecessor actually left by dropping a pile of files in the middle of the floor where he stood, and walking out without a word. I gritted my teeth, took Milk of Magnesia, and wrote an absolute paean to her and her management techniques (which included not switching over from DOS until 1998 :P), and was probably the first refugee in company history to receive a glowing reference from her.
Of course, I really needed the reference-- you seem to be in great shape.
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jmcquown - 28 May 2005 22:32 GMT >> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >> industry as I've done most of my life, I've always changed job [quoted text clipped - 11 lines] > I called mine "Resignation". That way, it's clear to any reading this > in the future that they didn't terminate you, you resigned them. Exactly right. The boss sounds like just the kind of dipwad who would claim he fired her, especially since he just belittled her and turned down her requested raise.
>> Dear Sirs: > > I wrote mine directly to my manager, and cc'd HR Yep, I've always done that, too.
> I didn't provide them any information about my new employment in my > letter. I told him when my boss asked, but otherwise I didn't think it > was any of their business. Agreed.
> Again, I didn't bring up my new employer. I told them that I'd be > happy to transition my duties to anyone they designated and let it go > at that. And to be honest, if they didn't have a backup plan for what to do if she quit or got hit by a bus, it's really their own fault, isn't it?
I'm constantly told by former co-workers what a shambles and mistake it was for that manager to let me go. People started bailing right and left, either electing to move into other departments or even go back from whence they came after clamouring to get into Support.
I am much better off, even if I am still technically unemployed. Life was becoming living hell there.
> My comments aside, that's a nice letter :) Too nice, IMHO!
> Jeanne Hedge, as directed by Natasha Jill
Catnipped - 28 May 2005 22:34 GMT > >> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas > >> industry as I've done most of my life, I've always changed job [quoted text clipped - 46 lines] > > > Too nice, IMHO! Yeah, after reading all the comments I agree. I changed "termination" to "resignation", I altered it to still be nice and respectful, but not quite so gushing, I took out all details about my new job, and I didn't commit to anything beyond the end of my employment.
Thanks, all, for the help!
Hugs,
CatNipped
> > Jeanne Hedge, as directed by Natasha > > Jill Adrian - 29 May 2005 12:20 GMT >>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>>> industry as I've done most of my life, I've always changed job [quoted text clipped - 60 lines] > > CatNipped I wish I could be a fly on the wall when your boss reads it.
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Mary - 29 May 2005 18:07 GMT > I wish I could be a fly on the wall when your boss reads it. Just what I was thinking.
Annie Wxill - 28 May 2005 16:47 GMT > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or > reorganization. So, please let me know what you think about this letter > of > resignation (besides the fact that it's full of lies! ;>): ...>
> CatNipped, I think that overall, it is good because it presents a positive note and a concrete solution to the need for the short notice. It does not burn bridges and will not come back to bite you in the future.
Here are a couple of suggestions:
I would change the first paragraph to read: "I appreciate the opportunity to have worked for GCI (formerly Container-Care International) for the past 13 months. I learned a lot during that time and believe that I contributed positively to the business as well."
Second paragraph combine your second and third paragraphs as follows: "Unfortunately, I must tender to you my resignation. I have been offered a job working at my first career choice, web architecture.
The rest of the letter looks good to me.
If you want, you could mention at the end of the first paragraph some of those positive contributions. You don't have to go overboard, but it will re-enforce your value to the company and will look good in your file if anyone needs to refer to it in the future.
Just my 2 cents. Hope it helps. Good luck in your new position. Annie
Hopitus - 28 May 2005 17:11 GMT Your letter is very good, I think. All suggestions of rpca posters look good also; I totally agree w/don't elaborate on whom you're going to work for when you leave. I would just leave out that entire paragraph starting with "Since".......things may have changed since I was young in employment world, but people haven't.
>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry >> as [quoted text clipped - 33 lines] > Good luck in your new position. > Annie Helen Miles - 28 May 2005 17:06 GMT > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or > reorganization. So, please let me know what you think about this letter of > resignation (besides the fact that it's full of lies!//// I've got a better one <VBG>
Dear a$$wipe,
Because you were such sh*ts to me and I was unable to do my job because of the fact you are all unreasonable a$$holes, I've decided to get a better job - which I now have - Hahaha.
BTW - I'm suing you and your company because I now have long term stress no thanks to you!
Up yours, Catnipped.
Then again, maybe not ;o)
On a serious note, It's a great letter although I personally wouldn't tell them that you've moved back into web design - I'd leave that out altogether. It's none of their beeswax.
Good news about the job!
Helen M
Catnipped - 28 May 2005 17:45 GMT > > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or [quoted text clipped - 24 lines] > > Helen M ROTFLMAOWTIME! Oh how I *wish* I could send your letter instead! ;>
Hugs,
CatNipped
jmcquown - 28 May 2005 22:20 GMT >>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>> industry as I've done most of my life, I've always changed job [quoted text clipped - 31 lines] > > CatNipped I agree with others not to give them details of your new employer, nor to commit to doing any of their web stuff on a contract basis. I would state I found a position which better fits my professional skills and leave it at that. If you WANT to do some contract work, I would phrase it in such a way that you MIGHT be able to assist with some web work on a contract basis once you've settled in to your new position.
I realize you don't want to slam the door, but you don't really know how busy you're going to be in your new position. And frankly, you don't owe anyone, especially your old boss, a damn thing. So leave the contract option open, if you wish, but don't tell them specifics about how that would work unless they approach you later about it. My 2 cents.
Jill
mlbriggs - 28 May 2005 18:24 GMT > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or [quoted text clipped - 32 lines] > > CatNipped IMHO -- why bother with a letter? Just walk in and tell them you are giving them one week's notice. Do not elaborate -- the less said the better. If you feel you must write a letter, make it as simple as possible and don't give excuses. MLB
Mary - 28 May 2005 20:31 GMT > > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or [quoted text clipped - 37 lines] > better. If you feel you must write a letter, make it as simple as > possible and don't give excuses. MLB I like the letter. She is killing them with kindness and making them feel as small as they are for mistreating her. I think it shows great personal style. But to each her own. :)
Pamela Shirk - 28 May 2005 22:23 GMT > IMHO -- why bother with a letter? Just walk in and tell them you are > giving them one week's notice. Do not elaborate -- the less said the > better. If you feel you must write a letter, make it as simple as > possible and don't give excuses. MLB If Catnipped doesn't send a letter of resignation, someone can claim (and probably would) that she didn't officially resign and then try to stick it to her. Personally, I'd keep my new information vague and not let the old company think that they can continue to use her, as was suggested by the other members of the group. I think that Lori was much nicer than I would have been, but then I'm not a nice person.
Pam S.
Catnipped - 28 May 2005 22:23 GMT > > IMHO -- why bother with a letter? Just walk in and tell them you are > > giving them one week's notice. Do not elaborate -- the less said the [quoted text clipped - 9 lines] > > Pam S. LIAR! You are too nice. In fact you're one of the nicest people I know! ;>
Hugs,
CatNipped
MaryL - 22 Mar 2008 20:48 GMT >> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry >> as [quoted text clipped - 42 lines] > better. If you feel you must write a letter, make it as simple as > possible and don't give excuses. MLB I did not see the original thread, but I agree that the message should be kept simple. It is not necessary to say where the new place of employment will be, and don't make any suggestions about handling the transition.
MaryL
CatNipped - 22 Mar 2008 22:46 GMT >>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry >>> as [quoted text clipped - 51 lines] > > MaryL I don't know what happened, but this original note is from May 2005! I've had, let's see, THREE jobs since then (counting my current one)! ;>
Hugs,
CatNipped
Kyla =^..^= - 22 Mar 2008 23:05 GMT "CatNipped" <
> "MaryL" <>> >> "mlbriggs" [quoted text clipped - 65 lines] > > CatNipped IDK, it sounded like a nice letter, to me, but I agree that IF he wants to write them a letter, he doesn't have to tell them where he's going to be employed next. I mean, he probably had to put his current employer on his 'job references' in the first place, so they might be aware that he's leaving. I mean, we gotta face it, MEN are defined by their jobs/careers and when his 'dream job' was offered to him, he 'went for it', but didn't want to leave his current employer in a 'bind', if you will, offering his services till they find someone to replace him and it was nice of him telling them about his experience at his work place and wishing them well. If I was an employer, I'd appreciate a letter like that. But hey, as Dennis Miller says "that's just my opinion, I could be wrong" Good luck on yer new job. Kyla
Jo Firey - 22 Mar 2008 23:11 GMT "CatNipped" <CatNipped@PossiblePlaces.com> wrote in message >>
> I don't know what happened, but this original note is from May 2005! I've > had, let's see, THREE jobs since then (counting my current one)! ;> > > Hugs, > > CatNipped I was wondering, not only about the date mentioned for the letter, and the strange feeling I'd read it before. But I thought you really liked your current job.
Worried me.
Jo
MaryL - 23 Mar 2008 00:51 GMT >>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry >>>> as [quoted text clipped - 62 lines] > > CatNipped Duh! I didn't notice the date at the top of the message. I was puzzled, though, because this did not sound like your current job.
MaryL
CatNipped - 23 Mar 2008 01:32 GMT >>>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>>>> industry as [quoted text clipped - 68 lines] > > MaryL Every once in a while the newsfeed burps and something like this happens - oh well, keeps life interesting.
Yes, I do like my current job a lot (hopefully, this will be my LAST job <fingers crossed>).
Hugs,
CatNipped
mlbriggs - 23 Mar 2008 01:45 GMT >>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry >>>> as [quoted text clipped - 58 lines] > > CatNipped As I have said often before: I think my computer hates me. It frequently does not post a current reply but will throw out an oldie. My son has promised to take this thing and fix it but he is awfully busy right now. I think it suffers from old age, so I tend to understand (I think). MLB
CatNipped - 23 Mar 2008 02:10 GMT >>>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>>>> industry [quoted text clipped - 73 lines] > right now. I think it suffers from old age, so I tend to understand (I > think). MLB Ah we all get a bit flaky as the hardware ages (unfortunately I think my software is going too via not-so-early onset of senility)! ;>
Hugs,
CatNipped
Granby - 23 Mar 2008 02:34 GMT It is a good thing I don't have much of a life. From time to time, my pc send whatever email I have written to every one on my address page. In different circumstances that could be embarrassing!!!
>>>>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>>>>> industry [quoted text clipped - 81 lines] > > CatNipped Kyla =^..^= - 24 Mar 2008 01:45 GMT LOL, well I didn't get one :( j/k I can remember 'before pc's' before TV's...eek! I remember having 'pen pals' when I was growing up. That was alot of fun. Used the stripy Air Mail envelopes, I forget what AM postage was back then, 10 cents IIRC.. Kyla..off to nap out with Mosey for an hour "Granby"
> It is a good thing I don't have much of a life. From time to time, my pc > send whatever email I have written to every one on my address page. In [quoted text clipped - 96 lines] >> >> CatNipped Sherry - 23 Mar 2008 04:49 GMT > >>>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas > >>>>> industry [quoted text clipped - 82 lines] > > - Show quoted text - Heh. I thought that post sounded weirdly familiar. It's creepy when that happens. Especially when I cringe just thinking about some of the posts I've authored in the past might possibly be resurrected. Holy crap. Sherry
jmcquown - 23 Mar 2008 13:52 GMT >>>>>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>>>>>> industry [quoted text clipped - 27 lines] > possibly be resurrected. Holy crap. > Sherry Not only that, but CN's employer could have easily read the post. Not that it would have mattered since she already had another job lined up! LOL
CatNipped - 24 Mar 2008 16:23 GMT >>>>>>>> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >>>>>>>> industry [quoted text clipped - 31 lines] > that it would have mattered since she already had another job lined up! > LOL Only if they knew I was "CatNipped"! ;> OK, I know they could look me up - this is the reason I follow my mother's advice... "always write as if your mother, your father, your husband, your boss and your priest are reading over your shoulder and you'll never have to regret what you've written."
Hugs,
CatNipped
Dan and Nancy Mahoney - 28 May 2005 19:20 GMT > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or > reorganization. So, please let me know what you think about this letter of > resignation (besides the fact that it's full of lies! ;>): Excellent letter!
Normally I wouldn't tell me soon-to-be-ex employer what I was moving on to. But since you're suggesting that current employer contract with next employer for your services, I think it's a good idea to do so.
Dan
SuzQ - 28 May 2005 21:28 GMT Very classy letter. Now write one that says what you really feel ;o) Mischievious Suz&Spicey
Catnipped - 28 May 2005 21:39 GMT > Very classy letter. Now write one that says what you really feel ;o) > Mischievious > Suz&Spicey I like what Helen wrote above! ;>
Hugs,
CatNipped
Yowie - 29 May 2005 00:19 GMT > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or > reorganization. So, please let me know what you think about this letter > of > resignation (besides the fact that it's full of lies! ;>): See, I don't believe in lying. That doens't, however, mean I can't play clever games with words.
How I"d write it (feel free to ignore me)
LETTER OF RESIGNATION
Dear XXXXX
I regret having to inform you of my resignation [this isn't a lie - you'd prefer to tell them to stick it up their *****]. I have been offered a position [don't call it a job] in web archetecture which, as you know, is my first career choice.
Because of the pressing needs of my new employer, I can only offer you one week's notice, but am willing to help [ie, I am not going to do it myself, but will help someone else] make the transition as smooth and easy as possible.
Thank you for making my working experience here interesting [in a Chinese Curse sort of sense] and I appreciate the oppurtunities to learn [that I can't stand doing this] and develop [a hatred for you] that this company has given me.
Wishing <the company> success and posperity,
Catnipped.
Hope that helps,
Yowie
Catnipped
jmcquown - 29 May 2005 00:33 GMT >> OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas >> industry as I've done most of my life, I've always changed job [quoted text clipped - 33 lines] > > Yowie I love the Chinese curse part! Ah yes, may you live in "interesting times"
:D Jill
Catnipped - 29 May 2005 18:01 GMT > > OK, I've never done this before!!! Working in the Oil and Gas industry as > > I've done most of my life, I've always changed job because of a lay-off or [quoted text clipped - 35 lines] > > Catnipped Thank Yowie, I like the idea of not having to lie but still be professional. I've taken your advice (and that of others here - especially about not committing myself to do any more work for them that would take up either my time or my new employers - and noting the contributions I made). So I've come up with the following letter:
Re. Resignation
Dear Sirs:
I regret having to inform you of my resignation, effective June 3, 2005. I have been offered a position in web architecture which, as you know, is my first career choice.
Because of the pressing needs of my new employer, I can only offer you one week's notice, but we can discuss what I might be able to do to ease any transition issues you may face because of this short notice.
Perhaps, as suggested by Mr. XXXX, I can provide CGI with continuing development of the company web site or intranet by having CGI contract with my new employer for my services.
Thank you for making my working experience here interesting. I appreciate the opportunities I was given to learn and develop. I hope that the contributions I have made to your company in return, e.g. your new internet site and the intranet and applications which run on it, continue to benefit CGI for many years to come.
Wishing CGI success and prosperity,
CatNipped
Mary - 29 May 2005 18:23 GMT "Catnipped" <lcrews@houston.rr.com> wrote :
> Re. Resignation > [quoted text clipped - 21 lines] > > CatNipped Very nice. I like "interesting." :)
Gabey8 - 29 May 2005 06:20 GMT Nicely done.
And kudos for taking the professional, not to mention prudent, route, and avoiding the temptation to observe things such as, "... feel free to transition the duties of making travel reservations to Jamaica for the boss and his chippy to someone else".
;o)
Donna
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